For example, "She was large but not obese, and crying had turned her face the color of raw chicken. She blew her nose into the waist end of her T-shirt, revealing a pale belly."
I really enjoyed the writers keen sense of youth and humor with her dialect. I believe it gives young readers a chance to relate to some of the stories, and most importantly keeping them interested. Some of the humor is expressed by the use of metaphors. I noticed the use of repetition to portray a scene of frustration.
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Good analysis; good examples. 18/20
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